Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
With the advent of technologically advanced society, entertainment such as movies and television are enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people. however, when it comes to the effects of such entertainments, some people reckon that the negative effects are more than positive ones. From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that the advantages of tv and movies are far outweigh the disadvantages.
To begin with, watching movies and television is a perfect way of learning diversified history and culture of the whole world. As is known to all, a fundamental reason why so many people are addicted to movies is that the movies consists quantities of knowledge and scenes of different countries. Seeing these scenes, people are able to learn more about other countries's unique scenery as well as their culture and history. I can think of no better illustration than the example of Bruce Lee, a famous Chinese movie star. Bruce Lee enjoyed an extremely high reputation among the world because he used movies to display the beauty of Chinese culture to the world. In his movies, Bruce Lee not only showed the famous Chinese KongFu, but also taught people how much Chinese people treasure their friendship, helping the whole world better know China. Thus, by watching movies and tv, young people would learn many culture from all over the world.
On top of that, another obvious advantage of the movies and tv is that they could offer young people more opportunities of communication. Undoubtedly, movies and tv have occupied most of the places in young people's lives. For instance, Marvel, Netflix and HBO, numerous of movies company have produced various of masterpieces, making lots of young people become their loyal fans. Moreover, such a phenomenon also allow young people to share their interests, giving those who are too shy to talk a chance to express their own ideas and attitudes to others. By watching and talking about movies, young people are able to enhance their social communication abilities efficiently.
Admittedly, watching movies and tv, to some extent, has its undeniable detriments. Fo example, young people would be overly addicted to them and waste too much time. however, compared to its pros, which would do good to people's mind and knowledge, its cons become pale.
All in all, due to the reasons above, I reinforce my points that the advantages of movies and tv are far more than the disadvantages. only via treating these entertainments properly, can we pursue for a better future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, talking about, as well as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78885938806 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540865384615 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4585441494 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340200139885 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975284757515 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823967913312 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166764216644 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081101272244 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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