Some young adults want independence form household, as soon as possible. Other young adults want to stay with their families for a longer time. Which of the situations so you think is better.
Family is one of the most important aspects of one's existence, because they are the people who accepted you for all your strengths and flaws, without any incentives to do so. Family is one who grows with you and moulds themselves for you, rather than changing you. Here, the topic suggests some adults prefer leaving their families as soon as possible, whereas some prefer to stay with them for a longer time. Personally, I am of the belief that one should leave as soon as possible, but only to return when you have grown as an individual and can appreciate the existence of family even more.
Firstly, leaving household at an early age will give you a sense of independence and immense decision-making capacity. Once you are out of your safe heaven and remove the metaphorical safety wheels of your bike of life, is when your test as an individual begins. Here, all your decisions have consequences, and no one to rely on, other than yourself. There will be numerous scenarios in a day, where you might have to rely on yourself to take quick, important decisions for your well-being. For a closely knit culture like India’s, here is when you start valuing your family’s small titbits, compromise, and their selfless love and care. You go from hating the constant commotion in your household, to missing their voices. This processes however scary and painful, will be very enriching as you gain immense mental, emotional, and physical growth. This experience might accustom you to deal with all kinds of situations, and help you learn about the good, bad, and ugly sides of human behaviour. All this experience is very vital for your growth and will help you become a well-rounded individual. This struggle might also make you cherish family's presence in your life, thus will make your visits or eventual return even sweeter than before.
Now that we have covered reasons for few privileged cases, but there might be some scenarios where the young adult might have no option but to move out of the family home. Like, employment and educational institute locations might also be major reasons for young adults to move away from family as soon as possible. For example, if you stay in remote and secluded parts of the country, with subpar educational institutions and job facilities, then as student you take it upon yourself to look for better opportunities, to help your family move out of there lead a better life with facilities in the future.
Finally, before concluding, we know that not all homes are perfect, hence children moving away from families for their mental peace might also be a reason for child’s early exits from family homes. Rather than living in a demotivating and mentally entrenching household, students might prefer to move away from the chaos to save themselves from further than caused trauma. In such cases, this move might help them escape the toxicity and concentrate on their education or jobs.
In conclusion, young adults moving away from their family at a small age, might help you grow and in turn help you cherish their presence even more than before. Thus, when you finally return, you might care and embrace the bonds even further.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is one of the most important aspects of ones existence, because they are the people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2642.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89259259259 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5361961299 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501851851852 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 828.0 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1978318693 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.090909091 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257295644163 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861707709641 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659862616539 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163585520583 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704763115715 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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