In this modern world, the population is increasing tremoundously everyday, but the land area remains the same. People were often well educated have advanced in many aspects and they have developed a sophisticated machinary for agriculture. Eventhough people becoming so advanced, they were lacking in understanding the basic problems. In the world so many countries have the agriculture as the economical backbone. Among them, if we consider a country like India, which possess the second largest population in the world having 1.2 billion people. India's economy rely basically both agricultural and industrial, but agriculture plays the prominent role in economy.
Rural people in India were often not so educated, due to this they is to follow old traditions for harvesting the crops. Eventhough world is so advanced in technological development in agricultral sector. The implementation of these practices in India can lead to more unempolyment in India. In India, the people who live in slums do not have their basic needs due to the economical poverty. Farmers have to work hard everyday for harvesting crops. Farmers were often cheated by the retail owners and shoppers by not providing good seeds for crop. Moreover, farmers have no knowledge on how to sell their vegetables or fruits, they often sell to shoppers at lower wages. These shoppers steal money from both farmers and common man.
Rural people need to be educated well by learning new techniques in harvesting crops. They should also need to examine the seed before they use for crop. Farmers should gain knowledge on the soil quality and seed quality to make right crop. They should be supported technical advancements in weather reports from telecommunications. Farmers should be provided an oppurtunity to sell their own goods.
People should be educated to control the growth rate of population. Everyone should do some work by using their talents to earn money atleast to meet their basic needs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... population is increasing tremoundously everyday, but the land area remains the same. Pe...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...often not so educated, due to this they is to follow old traditions for harvesting...
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Line 4, column 419, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ical poverty. Farmers have to work hard everyday for harvesting crops. Farmers were ofte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27215189873 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87640646439 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0852810077 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95238095238 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1215548988 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402401163559 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388046043587 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733028147762 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312997637127 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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