students
In my opinion we learn things by the experience whether it is good or bad. So, I agree with the statement that students who are given grades in there work always give more efforts than their previous.
To begin with, I will say the education curriculum has build in such way that it creates competition between the students. This competition is of just silly marks or grades in there lower school that will might not have effect on there future life but, this grading system helps them to work harder, get better than there friends. This competition helps the students to not only grow in life but to survive in the tough competition of life.
In addition, I feel that some students work harder because they are scare of embarrassment of their progress so this grading creates pressure on students which helps to learn how to handle pressure in life also how to work under pressure. For instance, when I was in sixth semester of my undergraduate I have to manage multiple things my academic grades, foreign exam grades, and also my extracurricular work. This pressure helped me to learn how to manage all the work properly at this young age and now it is helping me to manage gigantic work of companies.
Lastly, I will say grading builds the confidence in students. For example if a student is working very much hard for the any task and if allot him grades to complete his fifty percent of task, it will motivate him to complete his full task with efficiency and with a joy of learning from that task. So, if in between he face some failure he will not ready to give up as he will remember that he has completed half of task nicely.
So, I think that grading helps students to work not only hard but also smart and efficient in such a way that it should be successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with a joy of learning from that task. So, if in between he face some failure he will...
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Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'between the face'?
Suggestion: between the face
...y of learning from that task. So, if in between he face some failure he will not ready to give ...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...ng from that task. So, if in between he face some failure he will not ready to give ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53726708075 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46368047063 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515527950311 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8211105932 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171418079116 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735451396399 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917237384499 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118282628085 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419650667765 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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