students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends
In my opinion, I agree that teachers influence students in some way, but the influence of friends are broader and more general. So, I disagree with the statement mentioned above for the following reasons.
First, the only place where students contact their teachers is the classroom at school. However, students meet there friends anywhere at school and lunch break and even while school activities where they hang out together. This consequently limits the influence of teachers who meet their students only at classroom versus friends who are more available most of the time.
Moreover, the time spent with friends make the students more affected and closer to their friends than their teachers. As I mentioned before, the only time when a student get to interact with his teacher is at school and most of their interaction will be on academic topics. While students spend more time with their friends specially after the evolution of technology that made it so easy to communicate with anyone at any time wherever you are. Eventually, the time spent with friends is more than the time spent with teachers that is limited to school hours.
Finally, psychologically speaking, students tend to spend more time with friends of their age. So, they won’t be judged by friends who share the same style, problems, and issues while they might be judged by their teachers due to age difference between teachers and students. meanwhile, students speak same language, have same dreams as their friends and this eventually let students speak openly with their friends about studies, problems, and interests. That’s why friends are of greater influence than teachers whom topics are mostly restricted academically.
To put it in a nutshell, both teacher and friends influence the students. However, the influence of friends is more than that of teachers.
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... friends is more than that of teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57911268118 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7526452348 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.590414821282 0.236089414692 250% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242745718868 0.076458572812 317% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119281239641 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364271848646 0.150856017488 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769557950744 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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