students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?
Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?
People may be shifting to the idea that libraries are unnecessary these days due to the fact that students have easy access to information via the internet. I disagree with this because libraries allow people to not only attain specialised types of information but also provide a quiet environment to study.
Firstly, one reason to support libraries is that some types of specialised information cannot be found on the Internet. For instance, the Toronto reference library is a closed reserve facility where patrons can only access information on-site. In other words, some well-known academic authors do not immediately publish their recent work online, instead, they publish books explaining their analyses and results. To put it in another way, these books are usually found in school and public libraries before they appear on the world wide web. Thus, supporting libraries would give the community access to these valuable resources.
Coupled with having a wealth of information, a suitable study environment is another benefit of a library. To illustrate this, research carried out by Oxford University in 2015 stated that students spent a large proportion of their time in the library researching and writing. In fact, libraries are perfect environments for this as they are very quiet and everyone there is motivated to study. Libraries have very strict noise rules and offer a large space with comfortable seating arrangements. As a result, they create an academic environment that encourages deep concentration.
In conclusion, although the internet is of great benefit to students, I believe that libraries are still necessary as they grant access to specialized sources of information and their facilities provide better conditions for studying. It is suggested that more funding goes into libraries to ensure that they are well-deigned and resourceful facilities for a community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45686900958 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93150446378 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.227161018 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352379889197 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127812130416 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18856789121 0.0737576698707 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291801705984 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.356495117212 0.0645574589148 552% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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