Studying abroad
Nowdays it is a well know fact that studying abroad is a wonderful opportunity to grow up in your life in all the aspects you can imagine. But also it has disadventages.
Firstly, it is absolutely right that studying in one of the top 10 best countries in the world it is a perffect opportunity in my life.In the study as well as in basketball.
Unlike as Argentina, the study and the sport are together.I am going to study buisness,thus if i came back to work in Argentina, in my opinion the diploma of canadian university give me a lot of chance to get a job.
In addition to this, i am going to speak a perffect English.
Secondly, there are disadventages. Studying abroad means be away from your home.
My family is very close, so i will miss they a lot as well as my boyfriend.
Moreover the tickets are expensive. With this in mind it is difficult that they travel to visit me. One thing is certain, i am going to miss they.
In the final analysis, although it will be the best opportunity of my life and i became a best student such person and basketball player, it will be hard.
However, i am going to want a job to rich money to pay tickets for my family to visit me. It seems to me like i am a blessed person. Becouse not much people can get this opportunity.
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...like i am a blessed person. Becouse not much people can get this opportunity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 242.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30991735537 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72832749451 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520661157025 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6093828108 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5333333333 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225971813263 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656296257427 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117174433962 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102807879359 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123094231061 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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