Studying Business
Nowdays it is a well known fact that business is one of the most studying program. Not only study, also is important owing to the world works due to the international business. If the market of any country does not works, the country will be smaller than the others.
Futhermore inside the country, in the cityes.In other words, it is the same.
All is business. All of this demostrates that studying business it is a great idea.
The aim of this essay is to know some adventages and disadventages for studying business.
Let us move to the Adventages. It is absolutely right that students get the knowledge of business administration as well as it gives practical knowledge of corporate business activities.
Moreover it improves business skills and marketing strategies. The program have got visits,wich incrases understanding the cycles of the carrer.
On the top pf that it provides leadership skills.
On the other hand there are one disadventage. It is that a lot of people says that business is a difficult program. Thus i have to study a lot.
However, as i see it , in all the programs you have to study so much.
In the final analysis, the program teaches how to develop a business idea into reality with differents knowledges.
I feel strongly that i can get a very good job in the future as well as i am going to make my own market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
.... If the market of any country does not works, the country will be smaller than the o...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...rmore inside the country, in the cityes.In other words, it is the same. All is bu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...edge of corporate business activities. Moreover it improves business skills and marketi...
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Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , wich
... strategies. The program have got visits,wich incrases understanding the cycles of th...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s that business is a difficult program. Thus i have to study a lot. However, as i s...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hus i have to study a lot. However, as i see it , in all the programs you have t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve to study a lot. However, as i see it , in all the programs you have to study s...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rents knowledges. I feel strongly that i can get a very good job in the future a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... very good job in the future as well as i am going to make my own market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i feel, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 237.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74683544304 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89353064544 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573839662447 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7197697628 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391786141726 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107535520005 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127129877523 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131172330434 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996208927897 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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