Taking more time to take an important decision is viewed as a bad quality by most while some think it is a good quality" what do u think? Give reasons for your opinion
As everything of life is like a coin that has two different sides. People should weigh the pros and cons before jumping to the conclusion. The statement is also like a debatable issue. From my perspective, taking more time is not good rather than taking a decision quickly for the following reasons.
Firstly, This the competitive world and we have to maintain the world with super speed. If we take decision instantly then it may require some error that may create some bad results. Inspire of having some advantages to take more time while making any decision, sometimes it creates more disadvantages. For example, If one person sits for GRE examination, he has to maintain the time otherwise he will not able to answer the whole questions within time. If he thinks that he needs more time to accurate answer then it will decrease his scoring possibility because he has to answer many questions. To make a lucid explanation, I would like to express one of my experience in the TOEFL examination. I and my friend had booked the exam date in the same center and the same time but I was so fast to think to answer the questions, on the other hand, my friend was very slow. After the examination, I figured out that my friend was crying because he was not able to answer all the questions because of lack of time.
Secondly, We have to remember that time and tide wait for none. If we do not make the right decision on time then we will definitely suffer in the long run and we have to regret to lose this opportunity. For example, Once there was a confliction between Pakistan and India and the prime minister of India had taken some times to make intimacy between two countries but it was too late to express his opinion. As a result, there happened a huge war between the two countries and it caused a lot of innocent people’s death. If the prime minister took the decision instantly, then the two countries would not lose any innocent people.
Thirdly, Time is a more precious element of life that may change everything, if we utilize the time properly. But, if we hurried unnecessarily then it will create a bad result. From my view, we have to make a decision according to think the effects and availability of time otherwise we may fall in some difficulties those will not be recovered.
Finally, I would like to conclude that it is not so easy to make a lucid explanation in a virtual way rather than practical way but it is needless to say that to do well in this present world we have to be more smart and speedy to solve any problems. If our thinking abilities required more time then we will do worse in any competitive tests in our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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As everything of life is like a coin that ...
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...to maintain the world with super speed. If we take decision instantly then it may ...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret losing'.
Suggestion: regret losing
...y suffer in the long run and we have to regret to lose this opportunity. For example, Once the...
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Suggestion:
...ot lose any innocent people. Thirdly, Time is a more precious element of life ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a virtual way" with adverb for "virtual"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...not so easy to make a lucid explanation in a virtual way rather than practical way but it is nee...
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...smart and speedy to solve any problems. If our thinking abilities required more ti...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...r thinking abilities required more time then we will do worse in any competitive tes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2185.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54261954262 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62017119476 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451143451143 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1500967619 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3181818182 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8636363636 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210363635638 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646437617826 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658672088029 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123265383472 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304128319917 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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