teacher should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom
Some people think teachers should share their political view with their students. People argue that sharing the opinion in the classroom will help the student to develop a better understanding for the surrounding world. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that teachers should not be allowed to share their views with their classroom students. The basis of my opinion is social and educational.
First of all, the class room is a place where teachers and students should only work to proceed in one category, which is the education. In the classroom, the main role of the teachers is to guide the students to reach their goal. Teacher’s role is to help students understand the subject better. Teachers are prepared to teach students and to provide them with a variety of knowledge. If the teacher in the classroom will start to talk about their opinions, either if its political situation or even social situation, they will deviate the students from focusing on their studying. For instance, when I was in high school, I remember we had a teacher his name is Mr. Kareem, he used to talk a lot about the news and what happened around the world. He usually stated his opinion. I can recall that most of the class was dismissed without any benefit. It ended up that at the end of the semester we did not done with our curriculum. That illustrate that teachers opinion is better kept out of the class room.
In addition, if not all but most of the students consider the teachers as a role model. When teachers start to share their views in the classroom, consequently will affect the students opinion. For example, I could recall a story from my life to illustrate this point; my son is in first grade. During the election between Trump and Clinton, my son starts to ask me many questions. He wants to know who the best is. Which one of them I will elect. I was curious why my son begin to ask those all questions. I talked to him, he told me that his teacher in the classroom spoke a lot about that election. He mentioned that the teacher said that one of them is bad person. My son was really influenced by his teacher opinion. Even though the teacher view is not right, my son sees that the teacher opinion is the best. My son did not want to listen to my opinion. He creates his view according to his teacher view. That is why I do not think that the class room is a good place for the teachers to share views with the students
In conclusion, sharing view in the class is not a good idea. The classroom is a place to learn. Moreover, many students greatly affected by the teacher view, accordingly this has a negative effect on the students personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, really, so, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5881147541 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53551020099 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428278688525 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0206331559 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2258064516 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7419354839 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54838709677 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389182069904 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110866616165 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105382443727 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281735129471 0.150856017488 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728189270979 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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