teachers respect
Throughout the history teachers have played an prominent role in development of societies and flourishing of celebrities. Due to its paramont importance nowadays there are a lot of discussions about efficiency of teachers. In this regard, and considering their role in education of children, some people believe that teachers should be appreciated more than past, while others opinion is that teachers in the past were better. I am of the opinion that in the pas teachers were more appreciated. I will attempt to address most discernible reasons below.
First, let me imply the difficulties of being a teacher in the past in comparision with today. In the past, people shuold suffer a lot of difficulties to be a teacher, which provided them more respect. But now, it is easy to study in a abundant universities an get a certificate to be a teacher. In other words, the more difficult is the benig teacher, the more respect they can get. My grandfather's experience which was a teacher is compelling example of this. HE was born in a small village and started to study in the elementry school of village. For continuing the study he had to abandon the village and live in dorm of the nearest city to study in a high school. He left also the nearest city and went to another far away city to study in university. After living and study almost for ten years far away from family he came back to village and started to estabilsh the first hisgh school of the village. Now after almost sixty years of his death, people aprreciate him because he suffered a many difficulties ti be a teacher. This experience taught me that teachers in the past had more respect that today.
As the second reason, I want to point out something which is widely accepted. It is now impossible to negelct the effect of internet in the respect that teachers get. Prents have comunication with each other and thet convey the information about the teachers of their children. So, they know how shuld be a good teacher. Considering that parents want best for children, if teachers are not the beset the will not appreciate them. I witnessed my nephew in last five years which never his parent stisfied about teachers. Always they want to change the teacher becaust they thought that teachers didn't try their best to teach in the schools. This examole shows that people knows about characteristics of best teachers and when a teahcer does not have that traits they will not appreciate him.
I conclusion, it is for the aforementioned reasons, that I have come to believe that teachers in the past were more appreciated because they suffered a lot of difficulties and also people could not compre them with best teachers of the time.
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...rreciate him because he suffered a many difficulties ti be a teacher. This experience taught...
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...s and also people could not compre them with best teachers of the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76545842217 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73464278253 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462686567164 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3810523701 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.76 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390401571056 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123863342633 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109720471239 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240178952406 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653770424437 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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