Teacher's salaries should be based on the academic performance of their students.
Teacher's main aim is to give information in the best possible way to the students so that they can learn from them in a very efficient way. Teacher's should impart knowledge which they have gained throughout their life to the students. Students main aim is to assimilate knowledge from their teacher's in their most convenient way. They should be able to gather a lot of information which is relevant to their field from their teacher's. The salaries of teacher's should be based on the academic performance of the students.
The teacher's job is to give knowledge to their students in the best possible way. The teacher's salary reflects the manner in which she has put in the efforts to improve the academic performance of the students. For example- In a school if the overall performance of the students in the class improves then the teacher's teaching them should receive increments in their salaries which indicates the amount of dedication they have shown towards them.The increments helps the teacher's to further improve the performance of their students. These increments act as a motivational force for their jobs and can lead to a more assiduous effort by the teacher's towards their students.
Teacher's can also receive decrements in their salaries if the performance of their students goes down. For example- If the performance of the students have plummeted then the teacher's salary should receive decrements. That reflects the way in which teachers have gone about their job. The decrements forces the teacher's to look at the ways in which they can improve the performance of their students.
Whenever the case of a student is considered then it is necessary that the one considers the overall performance of the students. One can only then argue that the teacher's salaries should be based on the students because there may be some students whose performance may have gone down as compared to what it was. Thus, it is necessary that the performance of the majority of the students is considered while taking the case of teacher's salaries. in this case there may be possible that their salaries may fluctuate and thus may not be stable as they want to be.
Thus, the salaries of teachers should be decided by the way on the basis of student's academic performance. Therefore, it may be the case that the salaries of the teacher's may become volatile as it is based on something else.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'by the way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231850117096 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.16393442623 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0632318501171 0.0866891130778 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0351288056206 0.046263068375 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0679156908665 0.0685040099705 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0351288056206 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70014874242 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327868852459 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00234192037471 0.00188951952338 124% => OK
Determiners: 0.131147540984 0.0887237588012 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0444964871194 0.0209618222197 212% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0187353629977 0.0139019557991 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2402.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 405.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93086419753 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283950617284 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246913580247 0.174417080927 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118518518519 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70014874242 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.350617283951 0.524397521467 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.3151762398 59.2087087015 63% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3157894737 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0179502347 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.421052632 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.7108512021 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.5350877193 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471809479637 0.300154397459 157% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.216458341441 0.103427244359 209% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0783543051908 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.669247976894 0.497263757937 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12766254269 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25197459785 0.114077575197 221% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144400342352 0.0781384742642 185% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.652609047964 0.336927656856 194% => Paragraphs have same ideas.
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107112005334 0.067059652881 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379594148822 0.210909579961 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509626760921 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.75985663082 362% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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