Teacher's salaries should be based on the academic performance of their students.
Teacher's main aim is to give information in the best possible way to the students so that they can learn from them in a very efficient way. Teacher's should impart knowledge which they have gained throughout their life to the students. Students main aim is to assimilate knowledge from their teacher's in their most convenient way. They should be able to gather a lot of information which is relevant to their field from their teacher's. The salaries of teacher's should be based on the academic performance of the students.
The teacher's job is to give knowledge to their students in the best possible way. The teacher's salary reflects the manner in which she has put in the efforts to improve the academic performance of the students. For example- In a school if the overall performance of the students in the class improves then the teacher's teaching them should receive increments in their salaries which indicates the amount of dedication they have shown towards them.The increments helps the teacher's to further improve the performance of their students. These increments act as a motivational force for their jobs and can lead to a more assiduous effort by the teacher's towards their students.
Teacher's can also receive decrements in their salaries if the performance of their students goes down. For example- If the performance of the students have plummeted then the teacher's salary should receive decrements. That reflects the way in which teachers have gone about their job. The decrements forces the teacher's to look at the ways in which they can improve the performance of their students.
Whenever the case of a student is considered then it is necessary that the one considers the overall performance of the students. One can only then argue that the teacher's salaries should be based on the students because there may be some students whose performance may have gone down as compared to what it was. Thus, it is necessary that the performance of the majority of the students is considered while taking the case of teacher's salaries. in this case there may be possible that their salaries may fluctuate and thus may not be stable as they want to be.
Thus, the salaries of teachers should be decided by the way on the basis of student's academic performance. Therefore, it may be the case that the salaries of the teacher's may become volatile as it is based on something else.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'by the way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231850117096 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.16393442623 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0632318501171 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0351288056206 0.0497285424764 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0679156908665 0.0444667217837 153% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.12292977631 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0351288056206 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70014874242 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327868852459 0.030933414821 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00234192037471 0.0016655270985 141% => OK
Determiners: 0.131147540984 0.0997080785238 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0444964871194 0.0249443105267 178% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0187353629977 0.0148568991511 126% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2402.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 405.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93086419753 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283950617284 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246913580247 0.200843997647 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118518518519 0.132149295362 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70014874242 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 219.290929204 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.350617283951 0.48968727796 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.3151762398 55.4138127331 67% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3157894737 23.380412469 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0179502347 59.4972553346 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.421052632 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 23.380412469 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.674092028746 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.7108512021 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.5350877193 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471809479637 0.391690518653 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.216458341441 0.123202303941 176% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0783543051908 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.669247976894 0.547984918172 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12766254269 0.149214159877 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25197459785 0.161403998019 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144400342352 0.0892212321368 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.652609047964 0.385218514788 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107112005334 0.0692045440612 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379594148822 0.275328986314 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509626760921 0.0653680567796 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 11.0 2.70907079646 406% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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