In this age, where education is reaching its peak, how we measure a teacher's performance has become a topic of interest. While many believe that the teachers must get salaries based on student's performance, many other advocate that the teacher's salaries and the performance of the students are two independent factors. I believe that the teacher's salaries should be based on their performance, and not on the student's performance.
There are many compelling reasons to support my cause. Perhaps, the most important of the lot is, how is the student's marks connected to teacher's performance. What if the student who couldn't clear the subject was eventually able to clear the subject due to the diligent efforts of the teachers, but could not score enough marks to bring up the class average. is it considered a bad result and hence the teacher is penalized? The teacher's play a very important role in a students life, they are the first role models for many students. If the teachers aren't suitably rewarded for their efforts then they also start to lose interest in their jobs, no matter how motivated they may be. To nurture a strong and healthy learning environment in schools teachers must encouraged to perform their best.
Secondly, teachers are like potters, they mold the student's brains to construct a strong mind. A teacher works had to motivate the students and teach the subjects. But this does not ensure that the students will achieve good marks in their examinations. Examinations are for students to express their learning and how well they have understood their course. The teachers can only point them in the right direction, but how information is interpreted and grasped depends from student to student. Thus, a measuring the students performance and deducing the teachers performance is completely unreasonable.
Today's children are tomorrows citizens. A teacher has the responsibility of not only teaching subjects to the children but also teach them life skills. Youngsters need to be guided on morals, social responsibility and communication skills. All of these skills are essential for a living. However, unfortunately these skills are not measured in any examinations. What use is an adult who knows to solve complicated math problems but does not do so help solve a greater cause. If performance of students were the measure of how much amount of salary a teacher gets then all teachers will ignore these essential teachings and make students learn only academics. This will conversely effect the nations growth and result in it's downfall. Therefore, a teachers salary must be unlinked with the student's performance.
To conclude, a teacher plays a very important role in student's life. If the teachers salaries were to be linked with the student's performance, then, it would cause a major catastrophe. Student would not learn all aspects of learning in schools and instead become androids who know to solve the problems but do not know when it is apt to do it. A teacher must be given creative freedom and allowed to teach in her own way. They should be encouraged and rewarded for the thankless job they do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246478873239 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.183098591549 0.158761421928 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0669014084507 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056338028169 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0457746478873 0.0685040099705 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0757042253521 0.118717715034 64% => OK
Participles: 0.0369718309859 0.0351676179071 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81966136873 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352112676056 0.0309702414327 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00176056338028 0.00188951952338 93% => OK
Determiners: 0.116197183099 0.0887237588012 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0246478873239 0.0209618222197 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0228873239437 0.0139019557991 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3144.0 2387.08602151 132% => OK
No of words: 519.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05780346821 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360308285164 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308285163776 0.251872472559 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.231213872832 0.174417080927 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113680154143 0.112833075102 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81966136873 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464354527938 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.0185396641 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6684587814 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6715980617 48.84282405 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.644075263715 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.54480286738 252% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.1285163776 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.25925925926 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363800963928 0.300154397459 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107847415752 0.103427244359 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.11329424095 0.0752933317313 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.450635558565 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157791702625 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126707329936 0.114077575197 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113304249012 0.0781384742642 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.445315190919 0.336927656856 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0955069575685 0.067059652881 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267475672834 0.210909579961 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927709366117 0.0618886996521 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 27.0 13.6433691756 198% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.