Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.

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Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.

Techer is the primary way to learn something and we actually getting our knowledge and ore morality lesson from them. It is typically disputed that in class, teachers should to make their own social or political views rather than should not. However, personally, I believe that teachers should not make their own choice in the classroom. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, teachers always focus of academic subjects in their classroom not to present their social or political perspective because the classroom is not a place to express personal interest. It is obvious that not all teachers held the same political or social aspects but one matter everyone equal that every one should to teach academic subjects very focusly. For example, in-classroom it does not matter if a teacher like republican or democratic party ar they come from muslim or hindu etc besides students came from different socitie, thus teacher always makes their personal view in this class, it would be destructed and prevent the worthy result of the class.

Moreover, class room is narturing place of versatile subjects so a teachers not to present his own political perspective. Teacher should always make some focus about to develope students morality and educatinal quality also to prevent the matter that could to hamper actual aspects. For instance, a primary high school teachers would like to make their own aspects, it is very unconvincing and does not hol any water. Although it is true that techaers has a own political view but it does not mean that they show this in their class. In addition, my university teachers support different political party some likes to democratic and some one like to republic but no one did not shows their choice because sometime it makes conflict and makes some negative perspective about teacher.

Although, tecahers philosophy and their morality indirectly indicates their social views but it does not mean that directly present their choice. As a teachure must be needed to show their versatality,not to consist their any specific matter and this way helps to students what they pic up their own prspective. For example, in a class deifferent religions tecahers consisted, also different religious students, so if a teacher always presents his own religion perspective, it could prevent and occur negative things for other students.

In conclusion, to sum up, the above discussion I want to says that teachers always show their versatility rather than individuality because of teachers is a role model of students and teacher is the primary sources to collect and obtain knowledge.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
...arturing place of versatile subjects so a teachers not to present his own political perspe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... hol any water. Although it is true that techaers has a own political view but it...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... Although it is true that techaers has a own political view but it does not mean...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
...one like to republic but no one did not shows their choice because sometime it makes ...
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...that directly present their choice. As a teachure must be needed to show their ve...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'say'.
Suggestion: say
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15825688073 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67092547639 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470183486239 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9117894479 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5625 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458709773237 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170214878604 0.076458572812 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11633406032 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28082441694 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086137029925 0.0645574589148 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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