Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I am completely agreed with this statement. because I think this subject must to learn for students who are old enough and they take course of political and social science. except those cases, making social or political views to students in classroom is never good completely, in my mind. it is better for students if they focus in other lessons that those are explaining in their books, and they learn what the educational system have planed for them. teacher should not make students mind busy by external case that those are not related to their books. in other hand any one of people have not same idea about politics and society, so teachers should not express own opinions to other students. school is a place for learning and training that students need to know and to use those works in their life. students need to understand any of cases that have learned in the school. they need tobe satisfied from their training. in my mind students must learn any things in it's time. in many country many of teacher speak about political or social views and if the political or social condition at that country was bad, students will be depressed and disappointment about the future and they can not focus in their lessons and they will never be succeed.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70909090909 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33802116654 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540909090909 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4593752268 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1818181818 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.45110844103 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226868105266 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940496442299 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574656742075 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226868105266 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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