Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The debate between teacher expression of his/her political views in front of the student has been proven to be controversial. Nowadays. many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration in order tyo examinr a constructive and destructyive facets of this issue. some believe that teacher promulgation of his thought on social and poiltical view makes student more intrested and enlighted in the subject which is very productive. while some hold the opinion of the opposition and prop up that not true. From my vantage point, I concur with later point and aver that teacher view's on this matter may arouse conflict and dismay in the classroom.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that people may begin to see the view with their teacher perspectives. His/ her view may not be appropriated with the subject but, the student blind folded belief more likely to adopt the view. On the other words, they became more parochial in views and in extreme case may embrace this opinion on their entire life with out deep consideration. furthermore, they may lose their analytical skills in their early life. On the other hand, teacher, who facilitates student view on that matter, make the student more proficient in their knowledge in social and poitical matter.
Again, teacher illustrates this feeling with the student, may cause more tempo in the education. student may raise this type of issue in the classroom which may ruin harmonious environment in the class. Surely, this type of issue may not have similar opinion at the same matter and can create more conflict between the people. furthermore, the important aspects of education will be remain aside and discussting matter pervade the while school environment. Thus, for the better education, this issue keep away from the periphery of student environment.
Lastly, although the aforementioned reasons cross the mind at the first glance, there is no means by the only reasons available. In fact, there must be one subtle reasons borne in the mind. expression of political and modern thought may introduce the politices in the education. many disingenuous are looking after this type of issue; on slight chance, they introduce the thought in the student's mind and agitated the environment and draw their personal motives. A vivid example to shed the light of the issue is my personal example. I have studied in the governement college where freely expansion of the poitical thought. students were so influenced by the political party and the teacher were free to give thought of their perspective. By doing this, conflicts and brawl araised in the campus, students were manip[ulated by the outer position to extract their interest. As a result, students had to suffer from the disturb and low quality education and on the other hand, less safety in the university periphery.
To contemplating all above reasons, all soon realize that how harmful can be introdcution fo this nonsense thought in the education system. Unknowingly, students get toyyed and face the consequences of their future destruction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, may, so, thus, while, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2616.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1801980198 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76506133031 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516831683168 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 801.0 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6246711048 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4230769231 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223617769577 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064011477925 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495075693159 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122918473352 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622939035339 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.