Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
A. Control the time they spend on TV or movie.
B. Take more time to chat with children.
C. Monitor the interaction between children and their peers
In today’s mpdern life thanks to the technological breakthroghts in every section of science the way of our life has altered dramatically. one of these technologis that affect our life is tv. I personally sbscribe to the view that control our childern with the media is a overtackle for this issue. this practice controls the viloents that childern are influenced by and also they would learn to be more responsible, the factor that is missed by our today’s life. In the following paragraphs my reasons will be elaborated on in more detail.
To begin with, there is no sectet begind the fact that childern might be watch some programs that are not sutable for them enough. generally speaking, since the advent of tv, As an innovation, theor impacts have been enormous, which needs meticolous attention. Spreeds of violent is one of those; in my opinion parents can control and this plays crucial different between our generation and the past generation. should the violents control in tv, childern would be behaved well. For example, students tend to act like a caracters in the progrome that are popular between them. Just as the caracter palys good act, so do mimice it with chid; however, it does not happen, resulting in parrents should have conrol on their chid.
Secondly, in the past childern accept more responsibility in the houesworeks. there was no tv and gaimes, therefore, they shoul spend their time more effectively, which is not happen these days. For instance, it evokes on my mind a memory of mother’s chilhood. she elastrated for me a sitiation that she had to take care of her younger sibbels, lerning responsibility. In contrast, we can not trust the child nowadays, because of medis do not allow them to raise well and unfortunetly parents cannot control them. In the other words, I feel although parents want to teach their childern to be more responsible, medias overshadowe each person life. In hence, with conroling this item, children would behave better like old days.
Drawing upon the reasons that I mentioned above, athough threre are several rules that can be excluded from general rules, I belive that with contoroling the factor of medias, childern begave bether. Not only do medias teach violents, but also take the chance to aech child to learn being more responsible such as their mothers and fathers and grandparents, Im mean past generation, and also utelize their time nether than wase it with nonsense tv programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03398058252 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76066386286 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575242718447 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.399793388 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208090761565 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575335956697 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519986284166 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125014733916 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350265267456 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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