Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of humanity, living in the better condition has played a crucial role in the progress of human's life. In this line of thought, some people are of the opinion that staying in the same place for whole life is more gainful while I personally subscribe to the view that people should modify their locations; I feel this for two main reasons. In the following paragraphs, my reasons will be elaborated on this issue in more detail.
To begin with, there is no secret behind the fact that individuals seek for ease life; providing comfortable life, sometimes it would be necessary to change the place of living. generally speaking, residents have a variety of goals; for achieving the goals, they might be forced to emigrate to another city, even different countries. Put it in other words, the more opportunity people search for, the harder circumstances they might encounter. To delve more into it, people who live in the small towns, immigrate to large cities to find better carriers, and earn more money. Moreover, there is no equivalent resource in the environment; some places are more convenience, some places are not. Therefore, it is a salient factor when people decide to modify their home.
another reason is that in people's longevity, it would is boring if they live in one place for long time. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to see the worlds, and live in diversity locations. In fact, some individuals are interested in knowing different cultures, challenging themselves with living there to foster and raise. it all happens if they change their home town. As a case in point, people can learn a wide range of skills and experience a variety of situation. Indeed, they can improve their life facilities by those skills. my personal experience is a compelling example for this situation. I have grown in a large city. However, when I was young I had decided to change my life; then I had chosen another city to live. Nowadays, I tend to change my country as a result of informing and experiencing different life to achieve more prospers in my life. All in all, I am excited with this model of life. Hence had I not gained the skills, I could not have made my life such thrill.
Drawing upon the reasons that I mentioned above, although there are several exceptions excluded from general rules, I believe that people should alter their locations. Not only are there much more chances in the different places, But they also can experience different way of life and improve their skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, i feel, in fact, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79310344828 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61388105272 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7130159604 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.652173913 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165545972612 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502627003446 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430416320473 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964398843462 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465805299199 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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