texting or calling
Over a century ago, Alexander Graham Bell came up with one of the most revolutionary technological inventions: the telephone. To think communication could not get simpler, with the advent of smarter phones, text messaging soon came along. While I understand that talking over the phone provides a more personal experience. I prefer communication through instant messaging for the following reasons
First and foremost, when you are texting you have the liberty to respond whenever you are free. There is no obligation from either party to respond immediately, and so, I feel that the pressure is relieved from both sides to provide a response at supersonic Speed! As a child, I would always get nervous whenever I wanted to make a phone call to my friends to ask for help for homework because I was never sure if they were busy or not. That nervousness has manifested itself into "phone-call anxiety" for me even as an adult because all-too-often, my friends' parents would always pick up and scold me to say that their kids were not freely had been able to text any of them instead. I would not have had to worry about bothering their families repeatedly with incessant phone calls until I got the help I needed. Instead, my friends would have just responded whenever they saw the message.
Further texting makes communicating between different time zones much easier, Often, we have to consider time differences when we are trying to get in contact with people who live across the country. or even around the world. My best friend lives in Texas, but I live in India, which. undoubtedly, can cause problems when we try to keep in touch. If I wanted to call her I would first have to calculate the time difference figure out a suitable time for both of us to clear up my schedule, and then call her. Around 10 years ago, we agreed to talk to each other on a weekly basis but because we had to wait so long until the other was free we often got caught up in our own work and forgot about the call altogether Now we just use instant messaging apps like WhatsApp to check up on each other, and if we are both online at the same time agree to join a video call. This saves more time and is more convenient than crafting an elaborate schedule just in order to call each other.
Finally, texting is beneficial in situations where the user needs to be quiet. Such a scenario may arise when a person is in a m!eeting during a lecture or even if they are in danger! For example, many crisis hotlines respond to text messages in potential hostage or kidnapping situations. When a víctim is hiding from the perpetrator, they need immediate help, and having to make a call to 911 would be a serious threat to their safety and security. Testing the police station allows the person to discreetly communicate their problem to the appropriate officials, without having to worry about being found by the criminal. In such cases, one simple 30-second call could cost the person's life Hence, firmly believe that texting is better than voice calls.
I admit that the entire range of human emotions can not be expressed effectively only via text, and sometimes phone calls are. indeed, preferable. However the vast majority of the time, texting is more flexible, convenient, and even safer than a traditional phone call.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...phones, text messaging soon came along. While I understand that talking over the phon...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...ith people who live across the country. or even around the world. My best friend l...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
...s in Texas, but I live in India, which. undoubtedly, can cause problems when we try to keep...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... scenario may arise when a person is in a m!eeting during a lecture or even if th...
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Line 7, column 682, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ne simple 30-second call could cost the persons life Hence, firmly believe that texting...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Indeed
...ia text, and sometimes phone calls are. indeed, preferable. However the vast majority ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...es phone calls are. indeed, preferable. However the vast majority of the time, texting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, while, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2747.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 579.0 407.700716846 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74438687392 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90534594407 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6527294248 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 318.0 212.727598566 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 871.2 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0230036703 48.9658058833 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.863636364 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3181818182 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317132934014 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879878543574 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845679221977 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197281935811 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939900962693 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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