Their is an announcement from the company for planning to build a large factory in your town.
Do you agree or disagree
Today we live in this modern world where increasing population throughout the world creating a demand of expanding residential and commercial areas for them. To fulfill this demand companies are trying to build factories in different residential areas too. Recently I heard an announcement, from a company that they are planning to build a large factory in our town. In my opinion it is not a good plan because of few reasons.
First of all, it will create pollution in our town. We live in a small town near different villages and atmosphere of our city is very clean. There is no factories or any kind of industries in our town which means no air pollution and most of our town people are healthy because of this reason. Suppose if a large factory will be build in our area then chemicals and waste products from the factory will create unhealthy atmosphere and town people will face different health problems. So, to keep our town clean and healthy no construction of any large factory in our town should be permitted.
Furthermore, as I mentioned we live in a small town and most of the people of our town knows each other. They care for each other and if something happens with someone we are always ready to help them. Having a large factory in our town means increase in population and more strange people. Construction workers during construction of factory and after that a lot of strange people from nearby town or throughout the country will try to get a job. There is a chance that these new comers will create a problem in our town. Chances of increase crime rate and insecurity among people of our town can be increased. I remember one of my friends who used to live in a small town and he was very excited that a large factory was building in his town, but the results turned out <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="out "></span> very bad after having a large factory. Crime rate increased and lot of other problems created so eventually he had to move out to another better city. That’s why I believe that an idea of building a large factory in our town is not good.
In conclusion, most of the people living in our town are because of clean air, friendly atmosphere and low crime rate. Therefore, announcement of having a large factory in our town is not a right decision. I think this way because this can create pollution, increase crime rate and un friendly atmosphere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, as for, as to, i think, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75943396226 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05536240224 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452830188679 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7558036268 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0952380952 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250117425978 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970871496275 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894093190445 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173593131677 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567711151335 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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