summarize the points made in the lecture about owning the franchise business, being sure to explain how they cast doubt about reading passage.
According to the reading passage, many people can fulfill their dream of owning the business without any fear of loss by buying a franchise. However, the professor cast doubt upon this by saying that recent studies showed that this is not true and refutes each of author’s points.
First of all, the professor argues that many franchise companies force their owners to buy specific goods and services from particular places. Even though these products are available in cheaper price on other places, but the owners have to buy them by paying more money, from specified places. This opposes the reading which claims that buying from reliable suppliers of franchise, the new business owner can save their money, because as a new business owner, they can lose money by getting products from wrong suppliers.
Second, the professor states that small business owners can advertise their business at a cheaper price as compared to the franchise fee they are paying for having a franchise business.These companies do advertise their products, but their advertisements are not only for you but they for their own business which is available on other places as well.This disputes the reading which explains that small business owners can save their money in marketing their products by owning franchise because franchise companies advertise their products all the time.
Finally, the professor says that it is true that owning a franchise business for new business owners is less risky, but there is a third option which is not mentioned in the reading. He added that new owners can buy already existing business which is not franchise. Studies have proven that owning existing business has twices as much success during first four years as owning a franchise. This contradicts reading which claims that new un-experienced business owners have more security and better chance of success in first few years by owning a franchise as compared to having their own independent business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rtisements are not only for you but they for their own business which is availabl...
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...ch is available on other places as well.This disputes the reading which explains th...
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...le on other places as well.This disputes the reading which explains that small bu...
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...ng franchise because franchise companies advertise their products all the time. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, third, well, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 320.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.225 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56146129863 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453125 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 21.2450331126 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.946287854 49.2860985944 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.2 110.228320801 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 21.698381199 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121780892559 0.272083759551 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543247767936 0.0996497079465 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382425792459 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847723854226 0.162205337803 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305605773258 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.3589403974 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 53.8541721854 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.498013245 141% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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