Do you agree or disagree
There will be fewer cars twenty years from now.
Cars are the most wonderful technology in this modern world. Before the invention of the cars people travelled by other means of transportation, but after the automobile became common more people could travel independently. I think there will be more cars on the road in twenty years than today because automobiles are more reliable, more readily available, and provides more privacy during travel.
First of all, it is a reliable source of transportation because if we have our own car we can drive and go anywhere right away. On the other hand, in the case of public transportation buses and trains we need to go their stations and wait for them to come at a specific time. Sometimes if they are late that makes us late for work, appointments, and schools.
Furthermore, car manufacturing companies are making more cars these days and if trend continues then I think twenty years from now we will find a huge inventory of different brands of cars. Obviously, companies will try to sell their cars and because of competition prices will go down. People with limited income will be able to buy their own vehicle because of the lower price. As a result, more cars will be on the road.
Finally, our new generation these days likes to travel alone with their own vehicle. They want to listen to their own music, and to have fun together with their friends and families without the annoyance of others. Cars are the only way of going out on the road in privacy. For example, my younger brother never wants to go out by taking a bus or a train because he loves to listen to loud music while travelling, and a car is the only way he can get this pleasure. So I think in the future more people will be travelling using their own vehicle and we will see more cars on the road twenty years from now.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, i think, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59133126935 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55724930458 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53560371517 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0240600355 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06452816374 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229368461465 0.272083759551 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089434081836 0.0996497079465 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953301137189 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149840109529 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978971597138 0.0443174109184 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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