Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
The 21st and 20th centuries has characterized by all the momentous changes they make in humans' life. Perhaps the most important milestone of these centuries is Internet. Throughout modern era, due to its paramount importance, Internet has played a prevailing role in human's life. In this regard there is a lo9ng-standing, heated debate among people about whether governments should provide citizens with the opportunity to have access to Internet without any cost or not. Some people are leading proponents of the claim that owing to its detrimental influences on humans, it will not be beneficial for not only citizens but also society as a whole. Nonetheless, from my own perspective, this statement is false. As a matter of fact, I whole heartedly disagree with such people and as far as I concern, I strongly recommend that governments offer all of their citizens at no cost. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into two conspicuous reasons in order to aptly elaborate on my standpoint.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that Internet is one of the major resources of gaining information, especially for students who are engaged in several assignments and paper. In other words, since conducting research or searching for information on Internet is more convenience than other resources such as books, majority of people have tendency to utilizes Internet. To take a personal experience as an example, when I was studying for a bachelor degree, due to residing in dormitory, I have access to free Internet. On the other hand, my friend, Ali, who inhabited off-campus, did not have access, and he used library instead. As a result, he faced several issues to acquire effective information and squander a great amount of time finding appropriate books. Had he had access to free Internet provided by government, He would have performed more productively.
Furthermore, it is established beyond doubt that if all of the citizens have access to Internet without any charge, it will fairness among people. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by recent ground-breaking research conducted in our country, indicate that approximately eight of ten people in small towns so as to buy Internet, pay large amount of money. On the other hands, people in mega cities because of several telecommunication companies which compete together, folks are able to buy Internet with reasonable prices. As a consequence, there is a significant difference between people in improving their skills and develop their abilities by using Internet.
To wrap it up, contemplating all the aforementioned reason, one soon realizes that providing all the citizens with the free internet can be beneficial. It is anticipated that if all of the people have access to the internet, they will be able to have prosperous life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, as to, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 30.3222958057 234% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2363.0 1373.03311258 172% => OK
No of words: 454.0 270.72406181 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20484581498 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09791954599 2.5805825403 120% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 145.348785872 173% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552863436123 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 419.366225166 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 2.5761589404 388% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5184834366 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.15 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33505162644 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952066193797 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713387363861 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20437871414 0.162205337803 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420240693508 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 63.6247240618 204% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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