Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The 21st and 20th centuries has characterized by all the momentous changes they make in humans' life. Perhaps the mosy important milestone of these centuries is Internet. Throughout modern era, due to its paramount imporance, Internet has played a prevailing role in human's life. In this regard there is a lo9ng-standing, heated debate among people about whether goverments should provides citizens with the opportunity to havw access to Internet without any cost or not. Some people are leading proponents of the claim that woing to its detrimental influences on humans, it will not be beneficail for not only citizens but also society as a whole. Nonetheless, from my own perspective, this statement is false. As a matter of fact, I whole heartedly disagree with such people and as far as i concern, i strongly recommend that goverments offer all of their citizens at no cost. In the sibsequent paragraphs, i will delve into two conspicuous reasons in order to aptly elaborate on my standpoint.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that Internet is one of the major resources of gaing information, especialy for students who are engaged in several assignments and paper. In other words, since conducting research or searching for information on Internet is more convenienve than other resources such as books, majoity of people have tendency to utilizes Internet. To take a personal experience as an example, when i was studying for a bachelor degree, due to residing in dormitory, i have access to free Internet. On the other hand, my friend, Ali, who inhabitated off-campus, did not have access, and he used library instead. As a result, he faced several issue to acquire effective information and squender a grerat amount of time finding appropriate books. Had he had access to free Internet provided by government, He would have performed more productively.
Furthermore, it is established beyond doubt that if all of the citizens have access to Internet without any charge, it will fairness among people. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by recent ground-breaking research conducted in our country, indicate that approximately eight of ten people in small towns so as to buy Interney, pay large amount of money .On the other hands, people in mega cities because of several telecommunication companies which compete together, folks are able to buy Internet with reasonable prices. As a consequence, there is a signficant difference between people in improving their skills and develop their abilities by using Internet.
To wrap it up, contemplating all the aforementioned reason, one soon realizes that it will beneficial for all the citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: provide
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Suggestion: several issues
... library instead. As a result, he faced several issue to acquire effective information and sq...
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Suggestion: all the
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...thout any charge, it will fairness among people. The noteworthy statistics, revea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, as to, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22897196262 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10118469188 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584112149533 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3937435276 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312325202049 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868257557557 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593694686378 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164120400609 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616556469572 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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