Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Providing Internet access is just as important as other services such as building roads so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost Use specific reasons and examples | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The 21st and 20th centuries has characterized by all the momentous changes they make in humans' life. Perhaps the most important milestone of these centuries is Internet. Throughout modern era, due to its paramount importance, Internet has played a prevailing role in human's life. In this regard there is a lo9ng-standing, heated debate among people about whether governments should provide citizens with the opportunity to have access to Internet without any cost or not. Some people are leading proponents of the claim that owing to its detrimental influences on humans, it will not be beneficial for not only citizens but also society as a whole. Nonetheless, from my own perspective, this statement is false. As a matter of fact, I whole heartedly disagree with such people and as far as I concern, I strongly recommend that governments offer all of their citizens at no cost. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into two conspicuous reasons in order to aptly elaborate on my standpoint.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that Internet is one of the major resources of gaining information, especially for students who are engaged in several assignments and paper. In other words, since conducting research or searching for information on Internet is more convenience than other resources such as books, majority of people have tendency to utilizes Internet. To take a personal experience as an example, when I was studying for a bachelor degree, my friend, Ali, who inhabited off-campus, did not have access to free Internet, and he used library instead to do his assignments. As a result, he faced several issues to acquire effective information and squandered a great amount of time finding appropriate books. Had he had access to free Internet provided by government, He would have performed better academically.
Furthermore, it is established beyond doubt that if all of the citizens have access to Internet without any charge, it will create fairness among people. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by recent ground-breaking research conducted in our country, indicate that approximately eight of ten people in small towns pay large amount of money so as to buy Internet. On the other hands, folks are able to buy Internet with reasonable prices, for in mega cities because of several telecommunication companies which compete together. As a consequence, there is a significant difference between people in improving their skills and develop their abilities by using Internet. Offering free Internet, therefore, can make all of the population able to use internet in their activities.
To wrap it up, contemplating all the aforementioned reason, one soon realizes that providing all the citizens with the free internet can be beneficial. It is anticipated that if all of the people have access to the internet, they will be able to have prosperous life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, as to, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2426.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22844827586 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11880479847 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553879310345 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8769871345 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.3 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358929072846 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103124183111 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704326355638 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219868807538 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406735622238 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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