Summarize the main points in the lecture, being sure to explain how they opposes specific points made in the reading passage
Torreya taxifolia is an evergreen tree that was once common in Florida region. From 1960’s it is in danger of becoming extinct and scientists are considering different ways to save it.
Plans to reestablish. Torreya in Florida has been ruled out by the professor in the lecture because global warming has resulted in a worse climate in that area for the tree to grow and flourish. Wetlands on Florida area have also dried up so these changes in the climate has caused the decreased growth of the tree and it is very hard to reestablish in the same area.
The second option could be very dangerous for the native species of that area. The professor explains by citing another example of Black Locust tree.When it was taken to a new environment, it grew to such an extent that it killed a large number of local plants and trees and hence they became endangered. So So it is at a risk to experiment.
The third solution is again not appropriate because for the population to be successful. It should be relatively large and genetically diverse so that it is able to resist diseases. Research center cannot provide a large space for the population to be reestablished.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...ng another example of Black Locust tree.When it was taken to a new environment, it g...
^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...t grew to such an extent that it killed a large number of local plants and trees and hence they b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: So
...trees and hence they became endangered. So So it is at a risk to experiment. The ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the population to be reestablished.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76179424216 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.4472637908 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4545454545 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06452816374 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0515050796864 0.272083759551 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192519617553 0.0996497079465 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021177983684 0.0662205650399 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0299018255651 0.162205337803 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299360260845 0.0443174109184 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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