Do you agree or disagree
There will be fewer cars on the road after twenty years
Cars are the most wonderful technology in this modern world. Before the invention of car people use to travel by other means of transportation, but after this miracle most people can independently. I think there will be more cars on the road in twenty years then today because it is a reliable, more inventory, and provide privacy during travelling.
First of all, it is a reliable source of transportation because if we have our own car we can drive and go anywhere right away. On the other hand , in case of buses and trains we need to go to the their stops and wait for them to come on certain time. Sometimes they are late and we cannot even go to the place where we need to go on time.
Furthermore,car manufacturing companies are making more cars these days and if this trend will continue then I think twenty years from now we will find huge inventory of different brands of cars. Obviously companies will try to sell their cars and because of big competition prices will probably go down. People with limited income will be able to buy their own vehicle because of the cheaper price. As a result more cars will be on the road.
Finally, our new generation these days likes to travel alone with their own vehicle. They want to listen their own music, and have fun together with their friends and families while traveling without any annoyance of strangers. Cars are the only way of going out on the road in privacy. For example, my younger brother never wants to go out by taking bus or train because he loves to listen loud music while traveling and car is the only way he can get this pleasure.So I think in the future more people will be traveling using their own vehicle and we will see more cars on the road twenty years from now.
In conclusion, invention of cars are blessing in our lives. If we have our own car we can go whenever and wherever we like . These days people are buying cars more than previously and if this trend will continue then we will see a lot more cars on the road twenty years from now because it is reliable transportation, people like to travel in privacy, more inventory will be available in the market, and price will go down because of competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50326511367 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.4507629517 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.117647059 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5294117647 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247414366388 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103297248285 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948206984508 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172445949839 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088386727219 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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