Do you agree or disagree
There will be fewer cars on the road twenty years from now.
Cars are the most wonderful technology in this modern world. Before the inovation of cars people travelled by other means of transportation, but after the automobile more people could travel independently. I think there will be more cars on the road in twenty years than today because automobiles are reliable, more readily available, and provides more privacy during travel.
First of all, it is a reliable source of transportation because if we have our own car we can drive and go anywhere right away. On the other hand, in the case public transportations we need to go their stations and wait for them to come at a specific time. Sometimes they are late and we cannot go to the place where we need to go on time.
Furthermore, car manufacturing companies are making more cars these days and if trend continues then I think twenty years from now we will find a huge inventory of different brands of cars. Obviously, companies will try to sell their cars and because of the competition, prices would go down. People with limited income will be able to buy their own vehicle because of the reduced price. As a result, considerable numbers of cars will be on the road.
Finally, our new generation these days likes to travel alone with their own vehicle. They want to listen their own music, and have fun together with their friends and families with the annoyment of others. Cars are the only way of going out on the road in privacy. For example, my younger brother never wants to go out by taking bus or train because he loves to listen loud music while travelling and car is the only way he can get this pleasure. So I think in the future more people will be travelling using their own vehicle and we will see more cars on the road twenty years from now.
In conclusion, invention of cars are blessing in our lives. If we have our own car we can go anywhere easily on time. Nowadays people are buying cars more than before, and if this trend will continue then we will see incredibly more cars on the road twenty years from now because it is reliable transportation, people like to travel in privacy, more inventory can be available in the market and prices will go down because of competition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion of cars are blessing in our lives. If we have our own car we can go anywhere ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62436548223 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59179187872 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467005076142 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2027075311 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257410706273 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101738947633 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105366751434 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177065561278 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941998251274 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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