Do you agree or disagree
There will be fewer cars on the road twenty years from now.
Cars are the most wonderful technology in this modern world. Before the invention of cars people travelled by other means of transportation, but after the automobile more people could travel independently. I think there will be more cars on the road in twenty years than today because automobiles are reliable, more readily available, and provides more privacy during travel.
First of all, it is a reliable source of transportation because if we have our own car we can drive and go anywhere right away. On the other hand, in the case public transportations we need to go their stations and wait for them to come at a specific time. Sometimes they are late and we cannot go to the place where we need to go on time.
Furthermore, car manufacturing companies are making more cars these days and if trend continues then I think twenty years from now we will find a huge inventory of different brands of cars. Obviously, companies will try to sell their cars and because of competition, prices will go down. People with limited income will be able to to buy their own vehicle because of the lower price. As a result, more cars will be on the road.
Finally, our new generation these days likes to travel alone with their own vehicle. They want to listen their own music, and have fun together with their friends and families with the annoyance of strangers. Cars are the only way of going out on the road in privacy. For example, my younger brother never wants to go out by taking bus or train because he loves to listen loud music while travelling and car is the only way he can get this pleasure. So I think in the future more people will be travelling using their own vehicle and we will see more cars on the road twenty years from now.
In conclusion, invention of cars are blessing in our lives. If we have our own car we can go wherever and whenever we like. These days people are buying cars more than previously and if this trend will continue then we will see a lot more cars on the road twenty years from now because it is reliable transportation, people like to travel in privacy, more inventory will be available in the market and prices will will be go down because of competition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56926952141 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56658129727 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455919395466 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6217672878 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267985130047 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107768265056 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112469974651 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185063079047 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101161661625 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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