Do you agree or disagree:
LIving in the dormatory is better than living in the home.
After finishing high school and getting admission to desirable college, it is very hard for some students to decide where to live during their studies. Some students like to live in dormitory while others prefer to live at their home and commute to the college. In my opinion, students should live in the dormitory because in this way they will be able to find more time towards their studies and experience independent life.
First of all, students who live in dormitory usually find more time for study because they don’t have to worry about the food, cleaning and laundry. University provides these services with little amount of fees. They can spend this time towards their studies. I remember when I used to live in dormitory, I was able to find more time and almost every day I used to go to library for study. On the other hand couple of my other friends who used to live in their house and commute to college it was very hard for them to find the time to go to the library and focus towards their study. If they want to stay late and then they was not able to find a ride to reach to their home. They had to waste most of their precious time for commuting back and forth every day. Besides this they have to do their laundry, clean their rooms and help their family on different household chores. So at the end of school year my grades were better than their grades because I was able to spend more time towards my study. That’s why I think living in the dormitory is better than living in the house or apartment.
Furthermore, you can experience independent life if you live in the dormitory. After finishing your college you have to face reality of life in everywhere. For instance, one of my friends who used to live with his family throughout his academic years and then after finishing his education when he had to move at then it was very hard for him to face practical life. When he was living with his family his parents were paying all utility bills and other expanses of living. Even they used to pay for his college too. He always had support from his parents but after moving out there was no support from his family and then it was very hard for him to face this situation. He started working but he didn’t know how to manage everything. On the other hand I was able to support myself very easily after finishing my college because I already had an experience eof how to live independently and how to manage your expenses in limited income. So I believe that living in the dormitory during your college years is better than living in the apartment.
In conclusion, most students like to live at home because they don’t want to miss the comfort of their home, but I think living in the dormitory is better. I feel this way because in this way you will be able to spend more time towards your study and achieve good grades and will be able to experience a reality of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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After finishing high school and getting ...
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...ies and experience independent life. First of all, students w...
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Suggestion: commuting
...o waste most of their precious time for commuting back and forth every day. Besides this they have to do...
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Suggestion: Besides,
...for commuting back and forth every day. Besides this they have to do their laundry, cle...
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...an living in the house or apartment. Furthermore, you can exp...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dent life if you live in the dormitory. After finishing your college you have to face...
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...better than living in the apartment. In conclusion, most stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 52.1666666667 173% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2406.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51407129456 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31249975919 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.377110694184 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1398444053 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2083333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153202269379 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602167206782 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701094117826 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110245745015 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191200954812 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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