People attend college or university for many reasons(for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
After finishing the high school, usually the next step in life for most students is going to the college or the university for higher education. They attend college or university for different reasons. In my opinion, most students attend college for career preparation, and for increased knowledge.
First of all, people attend college for their future career because after finishing the higher education, they have to face the hardships of practical life. In order to make a good career in life, they know that they have to work hard and graduate in college or university. No one can deny the fact of a value of higher education for future career and for prosperity. For example, one of my friends in high school belonged to the poor family. His aim in life was to have a good career and be financially strong. Therefore, he worked really hard throughout his four years of high school and achieved his goal of getting admission in a medical college. Finally, after working hard in college years of education, he was a doctor. He started making a lot of money by working in one of the hospitals in his own town. Now, he has a well established career, and is financially strong.
Furthermore, some people attends college or university to increase their knowledge. People likes to get admission in college or university to gain knowledge in variety of subjects because of different reasons. like sometimes for their own interest or sometimes to show off in their friends and family circle. For example, I remember when I was a college students when of my friends belonged to very prosperous family. His dad was politician and his mom was a lawyer. They had a big family and a lot of friends. He told us that he had no worries for his career but most of his cousins and friends are highly educated and when they meet in parties, they talk about different subjects with great knowledge. Now the main reason of attending his college is to get knowledge in variety of subjects so he can prove himself an educated and knowledgeable person in between them. At the same time, there was an other friend, who choose to have a college education because he wanted to gain knowledge for his own interest and satisfaction.
In conclusion, people attend college for different of reasons. I think, they attend college or university for better career and for increased knowledge in variety of subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82766990291 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68415876329 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422330097087 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1339439796 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4782608696 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9130434783 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338682282054 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129180961743 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119705548889 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296606801374 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123133272963 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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