These days high school graduates prefer to continue their education in a foreign country. What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of study at a foreign university? Discuss them
In the age of technology and science, the most impartible part of everyone’s life is education which might have a considerable influence on their life. Recently, many international students usually educate at the foreign universities. It has many advantageous and disadvantageous which are elaborated in the two following paragraphs.
First of all, let’s consider the great privileges of educate at a foreign university. Studying at a foreign university result in become familiar with those country’s society and culture, especially it will be appropriate for culturally oriented people. In other word, it is believed that, from culturally oriented people point of view, an international student live in another country where their culture may differ from the culture of that student, so the student could become familiar with their culture. Moreover, people tend to educate at the universities where are in the top of the ranking university in their majors. Therefore, they will educate at the university where the best scientists, researchers and laboratories exist there. In fact,
In spite of the aforesaid merits, Educate at a foreign university has its own advantageous. It needs learning language that are used in that university for educate at a foreign language. So the respective language that is needed should learn. In fact, however learning another language is suitable, it may waste their time. Moreover, international students who educate at a foreign university, might being away from their family and in all during their studying, they are not allowed to return their country and visit their family. Although if they are allowed to return, the high cost of travelling prevents them from returning their home.
To summarize it, educate at a foreign university have advantageous and disadvantageous. I think that its advantageous outweigh its disadvantageous because educate at a foreign university has lasted just for a short time and it is not during their lifetime.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'i think', 'in fact', 'first of all', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206703910615 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.142458100559 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103351955307 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0418994413408 0.046263068375 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0754189944134 0.0685040099705 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139664804469 0.118717715034 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0418994413408 0.0351676179071 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.18075639405 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0111731843575 0.0309702414327 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0893854748603 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0223463687151 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0223463687151 0.0139019557991 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2010.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 310.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.48387096774 5.86048508987 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406451612903 0.338922669872 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.358064516129 0.251872472559 142% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.238709677419 0.174417080927 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.170967741935 0.112833075102 152% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18075639405 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509677419355 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 51.6421552071 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 19.375 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3580796346 48.84282405 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.625 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 55.1814516129 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.49462365591 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417207518842 0.300154397459 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.1628760859 0.103427244359 157% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0905211007806 0.0752933317313 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512332936577 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164520891437 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174514418533 0.114077575197 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717383931468 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388492080703 0.336927656856 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0407086926604 0.067059652881 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291229832005 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303482257332 0.0618886996521 49% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.