Although a house and an apartment have the same functions they are different in some aspects. Discuss them.
One of our basic requirements in the world is residence. Residence is the third our requirements in life, of course it is clear that the water, food and clothing are more important than the residence. Some people like to live in a house and others prefer an apartment. Although the house and the apartment both are the residence where we can live there, the house and the apartment have some considerable differences that are discussed in the following paragraphs.
The house and the apartment have several similarities. It is obvious that both the house and the apartment almost are similar in some equipment like rooms, kitchen, bathroom etc. Moreover, the house is made by some stuffs; the apartment is too.
Despite of foregoing resembles, the house and the apartment have some very important differences in apparent and having a private garden, and equipment and costs.
The first difference between the house and the apartment is in having a private garden. Unlike the apartment that does not have a private garden where is essential for any house especially those are made in the metropolis that are extremely polluted these days, the house have a private garden in the yard and thus the house and the apartment differ about apparent. The apparent of the house usually seems more delightful than the apartment because the house usually has a private garden and other items like it. So it is more pleasurable to live in the house instead of the apartment.
Moreover, the equipment of a house is not comparable with equipment of apartment because the space of the apartment usually is restricted. Of course, although the house is more equipped and it has more space, the maintenance of the apartment is inexpensive in regard to the house. For example, the cost of fuel that is used to heat the house is more than the apartment in the winter. Also people who live in the apartment could divide the all costs between the all flats. Therefore, although the house is more equipped than an apartment and it has more space than the apartment, it needs more costs for save it.
In conclusion, although in a cursory glance the apartment and the house are completely similar to each other, there are some considerable differences. The house usually is more equipped and much costs, but the apartment is less equipped and less costs. Therefore, despite the costs, the house is an appropriate place to live.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'of course', 'in regard to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.12 0.158761421928 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0844444444444 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.06 0.046263068375 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0244444444444 0.0685040099705 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0155555555556 0.0351676179071 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.68339831012 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0133333333333 0.0309702414327 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.175555555556 0.0887237588012 198% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00444444444444 0.0209618222197 21% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0155555555556 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2422.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 409.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9217603912 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320293398533 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254278728606 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190709046455 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154034229829 0.112833075102 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68339831012 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.366748166259 0.524397521467 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.9833094569 59.2087087015 66% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.45 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0879223553 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.8778728606 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.83695652174 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388769016862 0.300154397459 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.218961784029 0.103427244359 212% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.117520432 0.0752933317313 156% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.711526835085 0.497263757937 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142020725813 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222739760015 0.114077575197 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813064642678 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.568421582175 0.336927656856 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107971942473 0.067059652881 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319117362105 0.210909579961 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371780808041 0.0618886996521 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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