In leisure time, many people like to explore places and try to learn about these places. It is a good way for people to refresh themselves. So, people go with their family or friends to explore such places and know about them. Personally, I believe that joining a guided tour of popular attractions is the best way to know about the place. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, guides can tell you about the places from a historical point of view. Since they have been guiding so many people for years, they know about the place more than anyone and are able to guide you regarding everything that even Google cannot. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I had visited Ajanta and Ellore caves with my school friends in Aurangabad and I was awestruck by the beauty of the sculptures in the caves. But, I was not able to deduce anything about the sculptures. A few years later, I visited the same place with my family and this time we had a guide with us. The guide explained to us who made the sculptures, the hidden meaning behind making these and other information such as how many years it took and how the caves represent an integral part of Indian architecture. It was after knowing these that I came to know about the importance of the place and I was able to experience the beauty of that place that would last a lifetime. As a result, having historic knowledge about the place through the eyes of a guide helps you know more about the place.
Secondly, guides have loads of experience regarding the place on their back that helps us understand the place in excruciating details. They are able to narrate stories about themselves regarding the way they live and how with years passing by, the place has gained an utmost importance and what it means to their lives. Consequently, they are the ones who almost everyday experience the place and are able to tell more about the hidden information. For instance, I had visited the vineyard in Nashik with my family where we all had a wine tasting. We even visited other popular places and we had half of a day trip still left. Thanks to our guide, he took us to a nearby village where we explored other pulses and fruits that were cultivated. It was pleasing to see those in an area that is so close to the city. Surprisingly, there was fresh air, and there was no one else except for the farmers. We met them and we got to know that almost no one visits this place as it comes in a remote area and no one knows about. Hence, I believe that I had the best time there when I experienced farming and the bond with farmers in that half-day. Consequently, our guide's knowledge about the surroundings helped us experience more than what we had asked for.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that having a guide by your side makes your learning about the place more special and detail-oriented because they have rich experience behind them regarding the place and because they are able to demonstrate the details of the place from a historical point of view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...es and try to learn about these places. Its a good way for people to refresh themse...
^^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...u regarding everything that even Google cant. My personal experience is a compelling...
^^^^
Line 3, column 720, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...these and other information such as how much years it took and how the caves represe...
^^^^
Line 3, column 811, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ntegral part of Indian architecture. It was after knowing these that I came to know about the imp...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 734, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ses and fruits that were cultivated. It was pleasing to see those in an area that is so clos...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, except for, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2483.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 553.0 407.700716846 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49005424955 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44346425087 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435804701627 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6919770763 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2692307692 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327026559169 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100198377011 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731108725071 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226813888623 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839482069919 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.