In the times of economy crisis, which of the following should the government reduce budget?
(1) Education (2) Health Care (3) support for unemployed
In the times of economy crisis, some people believe that the government should decrease the budget of education, others the health care, and still others support for unemployed. Personally, I strongly agree that when economy crisis happens, the government should reduce the budget of education because the government places emphasis on its profit, reputation, and the citizens.
To begin with, the government cares about its profit, and reducing the budget of education can save tons of money. That is to say, promoting the function of education can cost the government a great deal of money. For example, nowadays, schools need a lot of capital to build new buildings, such as science labs, libraries, museums, and dormitories. Moreover, hiring more teachers and professors will also cost the government a lot because the salaries are really high. Therefore, in the times of economy crisis, if the government reduces the budget of education, it will save a lot of money.
Secondly, the government focuses on its reputation, but reducing the budget of support for unemployed will harm its image. To be more specific, a country with low hired rate will leave a bad image to the world. Take my country as an example. Few years ago, my country suffered from a serious economy crisis, and the government decided to reduce the budget of support for unemployed. As a result, more and more people could not find a job. Moreover, people from other countries did not want to visit my country because they believed that it was not deserved to go to a country with low employed rate. Consequently, decreasing the budget of support for unemployed
harms it reputation.
Last but not least, the government has responsibility for its citizens but reducing the budget of health care will harm the citizens. For instance, in the times of economy crisis, the dwellers do not have much money. Furthermore, with no or little budget of health care, people need to pay more than before because the medical fee is already considerable high in my country. Hence, people will be unhealthy and do not trust the government anymore. Accordingly, the government does not do its duty well.
All in all, the government should reduce the budget of education, instead of health care or support for unemployed, when economy crisis happens. It is because that the government cares about its profit, reputation and the citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 236, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... not have much money. Furthermore, with no or little budget of health care, people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06297229219 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74016518206 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443324937028 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.153482653 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7142857143 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450277988387 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145908055691 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124158564679 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255543423171 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147925188979 0.0645574589148 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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