I disagree with the statement that it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. sometimes working quickly and making mistakes is the best way to be successful, but they are not always a suitable solution. If people work quickly and make mistakes, they will probably reach their goals faster. When they take risks, they can gain new different experiences and try new things.
These days, some companies need an employee who works quickly, They want to achieve their requirement quickly therefore employees who hire these companies must use all their power to achieve companies goals. As a result, this issue helps people to find a job.
experiences play an important role in human life. making mistakes allows people to have a lot of experience, to try a new thing. For example, my best friend Sarah has made many mistakes in her life. She left school when she was a high school student. First, she started learning piano but she could not succeed then she began painting but unfortunately, she could not succeed together. Eventually, after trying different things and making a lot of mistakes, she got what he wanted.
In today's world, our society has witnessed scientists who try to find a solution to send people to Mars. Imagine these scientists don't pay attention to people's health and work quickly and make mistakes, of course, we will probably experience a disaster. They should not haste in their work and should do many tests to be sure a trip to Mars has not any risk for people.
In conclusion, working faster and taking the risk can sometimes be the best way to handle some of life's issue but it is meaningless to say those are the best solution for everything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Sometimes
...d make sure that everything is correct. sometimes working quickly and risk making mistake...
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Suggestion: Experiences
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Suggestion: Making
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of mistakes, she got what he wanted. In todays world, our society has witness...
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Suggestion: don't
...eople to Mars. Imagine these scientists dont pay attention to peoples health and wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80592105263 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52514835622 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542763157895 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3248971262 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379073021406 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124923167364 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186347794995 0.0737576698707 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187604445609 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17613705394 0.0645574589148 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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