Topic- What would you think government should build
*Public pool
*Public library
*Public Park
Almost everyone loves nature, we all feel content and relaxed when we are near nature, like sitting under the shade of a tree or listening to the sound of a waterfall. So, when someone asks me to choose, what should be built in the community, then I will choose public parks.
Public parks are the place which everyone enjoys. If public parks are in the near vicinity, then there are so many advantages to that. Children always have a place to play and enjoy. In the modern environment, children have so many engagements virtually like, watching cartoons, playing video games, different apps on mobile making kids busy on screens. Because of this, they do not come out of homes, and this affecting their health. If parks are there in the community then, kids always have an option to go and spend some time out in fresh air. This helps kids to have some physical exercise, a break from the screen, and fresh air, all helping in giving a healthy environment to kids.
In the same way, adults can also enjoy their morning walks. There are trails in the parks which are best for jogging and walking dogs. Instead of going to the sidewalks of busy streets which is very dangerous. People have a place for a picnic to enjoy with friends and family. Moreover, we all know that planting more and more trees always helps the environment to get cleaned with oxygen released from trees. On top of this, parks always add beauty to the community and the city.
So, making a long story short, I would recommend my local government to build public parks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61454545455 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27107139678 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9652390352 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3125 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166034304474 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593139679692 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887943561658 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118647625613 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784768852851 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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