Some people claim that sports and social activities do not deserve the same financial support as the classes. However, as an educational institution, the school has the obligation to educate their students both academically and socially.
First of all, playing sports can increase the students’ team spirits and ability to cooperate. In a university, undergraduates need to learn not only the knowledge in the book, but also the skills in communication and collaboration, both of which will prove important in the future. A student who is good at playing basketball is usually good at competing and cooperating in the group and sometimes can be a better leader than those who only focused on the classes. The financial support from the school can bring a better situation for the students to exercise and make friends and create an open and pluralistic society.
In addition, playing sports can not only cultivate the ability of the students to cooperate but also reduce the stress in study and improve the efficiency of study. As a student with so much homework, I know exactly the sole class will bring tiredness in study. However, if we get some time to relax in playing football or badminton, we will have more energy to finish the following homework. As we know, exercising will not decrease our passion to complete the task, but compulsory in homework indeed make us lose interest in continuing learning. Frustrated and tired students can adjust their mood and rebuild their confidence in exercising so that they can overcome difficulty in a fresh new motivation.
Of course, classes are still the heart of our daily work. What we need to think about is how to raise the students’ interest in study and make every minute in the school valuable. Our country still need people who are good at basic science to develop our society. The importance of academy will not vanish forever. However, we still need other talents like in sports to earn honor for our country as well. For instance, some universities spend a great deal of money on sports, but they do not reduce the financial support in academy either. A clever college will exterminate the conflict between sports and academy.
In conclusion, we need to develop our sports equipment to better serve the students because sports can not only cultivate the ability to cooperate but also reduce the pressure in study and make their study more efficient. In fact, we are suppose to keep a balance between classes and sports.
There has been considerable
There has been considerable debate about the importance of sports and social activities in college and universities. In my opinion, sports and social activities should be considered equally important as the classes and libraries are considered. I feel this way because of two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, sports and social activities will help students in their studies. It is commonly said that healthy mind stays in healthy body. So, students should be encouraged to involve in more physical activities so that they can concentrate more on their studies. I can give my personal example to support this. In my school days, I was captain of my school football team. Even though, I was actively involved in sports, my grades were never compromised because of sports but I believe that sports helped to concentrate more on studies. But now in college, I am not involved in any sports activities and I can feel I could not concentrate much on studies as I was in school days
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Further, sports and social activities help in social development of students. We learn leadership qualities, how to do teamwork, to keep patience even when we lose, to always have confidence in yourself and many other good qualities. Involving in social activities help you to build confidence to come forward with your ideas and how to persuade people if you feel that your idea can be helpful for others. For example, my brother was actively involved in social activities and sports during his college times and these things help him to build confidence and inculcated leadership qualities in him. When he started his career after graduation, everyone at his work place are so impressed with his leadership qualities and confidence that he is always considered as leading person for any project work.
In conclusion, I, strongly, believe that sports and social activities should be given equal importance and financial support as to classes and libraries. This is because these help students to concentrate more on studies and because these lead to social development of students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98564593301 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74900682599 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488038277512 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5643500996 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116935498869 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403474833663 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414620704412 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733789476022 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027563727046 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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