In such a busy society, every parent is struggling to earning a better life foe their children. It is unavoidable for the parents to choose to send their child to a child- care center or to an individual caregiver. Though our children may get better care when they are taking care of individually, I still prefer to send children to a child- care center.
First of all, when the child is in a child- care center, it is more possible that the child will make good friends with other children in the center and cultivate communication skills or team spirits. As known to all, such center will organize activities like playing games or handcraft works to let the children relax and enjoy their childhood. So as natural as it seems, our children will get access to many more skills than children who can only staying with the caregiver. When staying with children of their age, they are more likely to talk and study. It is also beautiful to imagine that all children sing songs or draw pictures together. With competition among the children, they will also have a better sense of achievement than they get when they are studying alone. As a student who just pass the adolescence, I consider that the memory with children of the same age will be the best memory which accompany our growth.
In addition, staying at a child- care center is also more safer than choosing an individual caregiver because a well- known child- center is examined by many parents who all care much about their children. However, an individual caregiver cannot be judged fairly because children spend much time with the individual caregiver privately. Admittedly, children will get careful care in most of the time, but we do not know the exact details of what happen when they are staying together. The news of babysitter torturing the baby is not so rare. Therefore, from the comprehensive point, I will choose the child-care center.
Of course, we have to admit that children may get better care when they are cared by individuals because the caregiver only need to care the only one the whole day, while the teacher in the child- care center has to care for more than three children at a time. It is likely that your child will be ignored when there are too many children in the center. So you’d better visit and test the center before you send your child to the center.
In conclusion, the choice of child- care center is better than individuals due to the above reasons. If you want you child to get access to mare skills and practice the ability to talk and make friends, it is better to send them to child- care center. However, if you want your child to get better care and know exactly the caregiver’s personality, it is also a good choice to send the children to individual caregivers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...staying at a child- care center is also more safer than choosing an individual caregiver b...
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Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fore you send your child to the center. In conclusion, the choice of child- care...
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Line 9, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the children to individual caregivers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69591836735 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52717426109 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408163265306 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.136992719 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997915567077 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446709818752 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262336902681 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703007726148 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170789963677 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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