i immensely agree, with the statement that social activities and exercises required the equal finical supports that college or universities should pay attention like they do for classes and libraries. i support this for two main reasons. first, activities such as sports, body refreshments exercises promotes the students study habits wisely and leads them to tranquility. secondly, may also those social activities and sports provide better health for universities and colleges students.
First of all, begin with body exercises is amazing for human being brain it would help the students to develop their study habits also it may help the students to have a powerful memorization capacity due to changes in the brain cells because of social activities and and sports. for instance, when i was a college student every morning before taking the classes i had already been started running thus it puts positive impression on memorization and study habits.
so much for, as we know the healthy body depends up on carrying good foods, given priority to exercises, controlling and consoling our self about health condition all these has outstanding effects on our daily life style. for instance before i get marry, i was a lil bit chubby. i decided i should listen to the lectures which held daily about sports and social activities in the universities. meanwhile i started walking daily 30 mints in early morning as a result i stayed healthy up to now.
to be brief, institution such as universities, colleges,and schools should select the same budgets for sports and social activities as they do for classes and libraries, i support this for two main reasons. first, fresh mind people an get something in an easy way. in addition, healthy body can perform difficult work with full energetic body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1156462585 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74749937843 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0239933724 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159403968398 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601197285752 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717208782888 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104157620344 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657047224369 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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