Sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Some people disagree with that and some people agree with that. In my view, Sports are a very important part of our life because that improves our health and do not be ignored. For example, when students in the school take some exercise they ready better for other classes and be relaxed. Second, sports by itself is a specific course and students can improve thoroughly that and in future be a champion in on the field of that why not! so it can be important as well as math or physics. For example, one of my friend in high school be a very poor application in all of the fields except basketball but now she is a member of a very famous team and has good income from that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 559, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ampion in on the field of that why not! so it can be important as well as math or ...
^^
Line 1, column 685, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...gh school be a very poor application in all of the fields except basketball but now she is...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, for example, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 649.0 1977.66487455 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 147.0 407.700716846 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41496598639 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34692891647 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 212.727598566 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 618.680645161 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.81761302 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202683148056 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127454793285 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171248956289 0.0737576698707 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202683148056 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 86.8835125448 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.