In this right moment many new couples are getting married all over the world.They faced many challenges in their relationship before they feel confident to take the next step. I agree with the statement that says that the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship because it helps the couples to be happy, to instill good values to children and to create a good family.
First, The truth is the most important consideration since it allows the pair to be happier in life. The couples in these days almost always keep secrets from their partners that make them feel guilty if the secret is really problematic. On the other hand, couples that do not hide any secrets and always tells the truth tend to be happier and accomplish most of their goals. For example, I had a friend that told me that one day he lied to her girlfriend by saying that he was sick in order to not to go to visit his mother-in-law. However, He had a meeting with his friends to go to the beach. After that incident my friend felt guilty about lying and was not be able to see his girlfriend in the face. One day he decided to tell the truth to his girlfriend but she did not accept that excuse so they broke up.
Second, The truth is the most important consideration because parents can instill good values derived from the truth. Children learn a lot faster than adults so they can learn the good and the bad in just one year that is why is important to instill good values in them so they can become good citizen. Furthermore,children imitate all we do without even notice it so if we tell lies they are going to do the same.
Third, The truth is the most important consideration due to the fact that you can build a good family. For instance, if your partner have problems in her job and keep it for herself this attitude will affect the family in different ways such as fights between partners, stress, etc.Moreover, the childrens will see this behavior and will be affected too even if they do not tell you.
In conclusion, The truth is really important in a relationship since it can generate a happy couple,childrens with good values and a well-develop family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cident my friend felt guilty about lying and was not be able to see his girlfrien...
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...hey can become good citizen. Furthermore,children imitate all we do without even notice i...
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...as fights between partners, stress, etc.Moreover, the childrens will see this behavior a...
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...hip since it can generate a happy couple,childrens with good values and a well-develop fam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, third, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55498721228 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67971382127 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1030602641 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.733333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.45110844103 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192847773796 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763455550791 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617960087031 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112141892208 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163699412417 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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