TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Honesty requires the start of any relationships and it does not matter it is a workable or friendly relationship. All the humans all over the world hate lying and never trust the fibber, so trust in honesty is necessary, but sometimes people do not lie in certain situations, but they do not say the truth as if they are hiding something. In my opinion, mysterious people are not trusted.

First, in this period of life, most of the people have to not say the truth because of their jobs and their benefit, for example, I worked for company of decorations interior luxurious houses, and we always said lie to our customers about the costs of the facilities because of my present of each job I should do, so if the cost of painting 2 walls is $200 our manager told them it would cost $500 and besides of that cost $100 is mine and $200 is the painter salary and the $200 belong to the boss, and if I said the true I would miss my job, so what should I do, I continued my job in there and save that secrets.

Second, some people must say lie to people, like as undercover polices, they always acting to arrested the criminal people, and that’s their job. In 2009 I hired for police station, and I always looking for mysterious exciting part on my job, and my flag rank suggested me to work as undercover team, and I accepted, so I should acting as a gangster who robbed the bank and escape from police and would like to combine with other gangsters, so they believe me but one of them always ignore me and he had some doubt, at the end i had lots of marvelous dangerous situations, but I could, I recorded that they are ignoring the rules also they killed 3 guys and the police could prove it and arrested them.

Third, in romantic relationships, honesty is the most important point that can lead to a stable or ending relationships. For example, my husband always told me he loved me but when I was in travel, and he knows that I will come back on Sunday, he invited some girls to my house and I had some doubt about him so I came back on Saturday and he shocked when I caught his red handed, and after that we got divorced.

In conclusion, it depends on the situations people have, and nobody knows it, if they were on their life, but if nobody has a convincing reason and they ae only used to lying, they have to lonely because nobody is interested in them.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, second, so, third, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33181818182 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46372022668 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488636363636 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.005831705 48.9658058833 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.777777778 100.406767564 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8888888889 20.6045352989 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 5.45110844103 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831049728173 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408340527769 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274756835777 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045246817383 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222558362602 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 11.7677419355 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.14 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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