In order to traveling is the first exciting hobby that all the people like it and it makes some interesting memories that they’ve never forget it, and it’s not depends on destination. On the other words I should say it makes each person be happy then again some people enjoy to travel alone and makes friend in tour with a leader to going to a famous places and other prefer to traveling with their families or friends to have fun and find marvelous places by the chance. In my opinion, travel with own or with people that close to me is more interesting than tour.
First, some people decide to travel in some few days but they idea is they can travel to many places in short time with tour guides, and maybe they are right but in my view I really enjoy to invent a gorgeous places not always famous places that all the tor leaders shows despite it has some advantage and dis advantages, for example, when my boyfriend and I decided to went to Italy we didn’t have any plane to where we should stay however we went there and in 5 days first that was a great trip but unfortunately at 6th of our trip we decided to went a wired restaurant at night and in tight alley someone robbed my bag and we lose all our money, and that was awful experience that teach us never go alone in strange city by the way the police found the robber but after that we had never did it again.
Second, another people decide to travel by bicycle tour, it’s feel good to them, also it’s really hard to ride bicycle all the period of destination times. Last year in 2017, I decide to go with my father but I couldn’t ride my bicycle more than 3 hours and they told me lazy but I really couldn’t continue it anymore. but they went to Sydney from Canberra and stay there for 3 days and came back, it was funny moment that I could go to one road of our home place. By the way if anyone want to try it should be an athletic.
In conclusion, people should enjoy their life’s moments because life is too short, and it’s not matter how people enjoy their time but traveling teach you lots of things that you wouldn’t know them in your city, new culture and new people make sense to everyone. On the other hand, couples can know each other in better way and some behavior showed very easily like as driving behavior and personality similar as stingy person or not. By the way, I wish all the people in the world enjoy their traveling time and be safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 389, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG
Message: Did you mean 'travel'?
... to a famous places and other prefer to traveling with their families or friends to have ...
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy inventing'.
Suggestion: enjoy inventing
... they are right but in my view I really enjoy to invent a gorgeous places not always famous pla...
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
...iew I really enjoy to invent a gorgeous places not always famous places that all the t...
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...ly at 6th of our trip we decided to went a wired restaurant at night and in tight...
Line 3, column 798, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'done'.
... the robber but after that we had never did it again. Second, another people dec...
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...ally couldn't continue it anymore. but they went to Sydney from Canberra and s...
Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
...of our home place. By the way if anyone want to try it should be an athletic. In ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in short, by the way, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38177874187 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30300736307 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492407809111 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.743301336 48.9658058833 404% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.636363636 100.406767564 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.9090909091 20.6045352989 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.1818181818 5.45110844103 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895412917642 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044242772893 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314086696102 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616199360637 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256507602708 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 20.2 11.7677419355 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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