TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I agree with the statement that in any relationship, we should always be truthful to each other. Being hosnest and straight forward are always appreciated and it is essential in any relationship. Sometimes it might hurt our partner but relationship built on lies can never last long.

First, how strong a relationship is based on how much do we value each other, how much do we trust each other and how much do we respect each other. This can only happen if we are being truthful to our partner. If a person is not being genuine then you don't respect him. Nor do you trust him. Also, you cannot value that person as your friend or partner. Being truthful to each other is the base of any relationship on which everything stand. Just like in real world, if the base of the building is not strong then entire building may collapse, all relationships are the same.

Second, there is a possibility of losing our beloved ones if we are not truthful to them. It takes many days, sometimes even years of togetherness to know each other, to trust each other. But, a single lie even if it is insignificant, can destroy entire relationships. To illustrate, my friend was dating a girl in college. They were together from long time. His girlfriend once accidentally met her ex in a mall and they both ended up spending rest of the day together. That girl was just being nice to her ex and she really loved my friend. But, she kept this from my friend. When he got to know about this from a third person he was so upset. When he asked her she lied to him because she didn't want to upset him and there was nothing going on with her and her ex. But, my friend couldn't trust her from then on and eventually they got into lot of fights and they ended their relationship. If she had explained it to my friend irrespictive of the fact that it might make him sad, all this might not have happened.

On the other hand, there are circumstnces where telling truth might not be good, such as doctor patient relationship. If a doctor knows that his patient is suffering from life threatening disease, then it is not good to tell him on directly. However, hiding it from patient is not good too. For example if a patient is suffering from AIDS which is not a curable disease, hiding this fact from patient might cause great problems. If he/ she is not aware of this, then there are possibilities of their partner even child getting AIDS. In such a situation doctor should know how to tell the truth that does not unnerve the patient.

In summary, it is always good to be truthful to our partner in relationship. Sometimes truths could be harsh, bitter which might upset our partner but in long run it will definitely help each other.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f we are being truthful to our partner. If a person is not being genuine then you ...
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Suggestion: don't
... a person is not being genuine then you dont respect him. Nor do you trust him. Also...
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Suggestion: didn't
...e asked her she lied to him because she didnt want to upset him and there was nothing...
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... on with her and her ex. But, my friend couldnt trust her from then on and eventually t...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, then, third, for example, in summary, such as, on the other hand, to tell the truth

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 15.1003584229 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48588709677 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53003469142 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443548387097 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6823941731 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1666666667 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63333333333 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117538496365 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392826281638 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515381727759 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870738534268 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577629679072 0.0645574589148 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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