Decisions often play a significant role in a person's life. Even though some people think that an individual should take his decisions on his own, I strongly believe that he should always seek others openion. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in folloeing essay.
First, by seeking out others openion on a issue, one can explore various facet which otherwise he wouldn't have discovered by himself. Sometimes we make decisions in haste completely neglecting its cons. My personal experience is a compelling examplke of this. When I graduated from highschool, I wanted to take up arts as major subject in college because I had scored highest marks in social science in highschool. When I told my parents about this they opposed it. According to them, my interest my interest has always been in science even though I didn't get very good mark in that. It was true, I loved maths and chemistry. However, I didn't want to take up science because I hated biology and I got less grade in science because of this subject. When I told my parents about this, they introduced me to computer science. I cannot be more glad for taking up science as my major in college. Had I not taken my parents openion I would have ended up taking up a course in which I am least interested in.
Second, some decisions are irrevocable and their impacts could be terrific. But, it could be avoided by taking the advise from others. For example, if a company CEO sets the goal without discussing it with his followers then it might not be accomplished. Because he may not be aware of all the contributing factors like if company has enough resources, time or will the product going to be useful. There could be people who know about these information better than CEO because they deal with these things in day-today basis. Thus, even though if a person is in higher authority, he cannot be a master in everything. There will always be people who are better than us in one or other field. It is always good to take thier advice.
In summary, I strongly believe that we should not make our decisions on our own. Because, most of the time we tend to see only positive side of our decision and there will always be at least one person who knows better than us in that field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ions often play a significant role in a persons life. Even though some people think tha...
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...First, by seeking out others openion on a issue, one can explore various facet wh...
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...xplore various facet which otherwise he wouldnt have discovered by himself. Sometimes w...
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'scored the highest'.
Suggestion: scored the highest
... major subject in college because I had scored highest marks in social science in highschool. ...
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... marks in social science in highschool. When I told my parents about this they oppos...
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'my interest'.
Suggestion: my interest
...his they opposed it. According to them, my interest my interest has always been in science even though ...
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...as always been in science even though I didnt get very good mark in that. It was true...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...I loved maths and chemistry. However, I didnt want to take up science because I hated...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...fic. But, it could be avoided by taking the advise from others. For example, if a company ...
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
... But, it could be avoided by taking the advise from others. For example, if a company ...
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...l. There could be people who know about these information better than CEO because they deal with ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, thus, at least, for example, i feel, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58476658477 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50930330137 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53316953317 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9631714233 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9583333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844447581608 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269421224229 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344761924154 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694562576966 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417980056313 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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