There is no doubt that friendship is one of the most important relationships. Friendship is the mean of honest, reliability, loyalty and honest. I think that lonely person is looks like the body without soul. From my perspective, I see that every kinds of relationship are necessary as you are capable of making new friends on the different stages of your life. However, the real friendship is the relation with the old friends. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanation is going to be as follow.
First, the old friendship is the cause of happiness. As person can have interested time with his old friends than the new friend as they know each other well from long time. For example, my old friend Mariam is very close to me, I have met her from twenty years and our relation still power. Mariam knows everything about me, what I like and what I hate. As soon as I feel very boring, I call Mariam because I’m sure that she is the only one that can change my mood and makes me happy.
Second, the old friend is the one that always behind you through thick and thin. If you are in trouble, only your dear friend that will support you. For instance, when my dad was supposed to have a dangerous surgery, my family was in a bad situation because we were spending all the money for my father’s medication. I was very surprised when the hospital management told me that my friend Mariam had paid the bill. Really, I’m so lucky to have a friend like that.
Third, my old friend is one of the family members; he or she does not end your friendship even what was having happened. For instance, my relation with Mariam was having a lot of ups and downs. We had a lot of conflicts, one of them was that I was promised Mariam to go with her to the doctor, but unfortunately I forgot the appointment and Mariam was very angry from me. Although, she said that I’m her sister and she will never leave me.
From the aforementioned reasons, I recommend any one to keep his old friendship strong because it is the honest relation on the earth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...ch side. The explanation is going to be as follow. First, the old friendship is the ca...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...the aforementioned reasons, I recommend any one to keep his old friendship strong becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, really, second, so, still, third, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50393700787 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53817852367 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50656167979 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6504614211 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3181818182 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152363860185 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520606451879 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562936729113 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908637282673 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351266411727 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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