I disagree with the statement, the cars in used will improve in the future. Each time is more necessary the car use, the hectic life produces it. According to the world economy, the facilities to obtain a credit to buy a car will increase,. The family living far requires a more comfortable way of transportation. The life of some people could demand timesaving to spend this in work or family activities.
Firstly, nowadays the facilities to buy a car each time is easy, in some case to receive a credit to car do not need to prove your salary. The requirements today are less than years ago. Maybe the economy of the companies lets them, as a strategy to attract customers and increase the sales. Therefore currently the people of the middle class can obtain a credit and buy a car. In twenty years this will provoke an increment of cars than today.
Secondly, accordingly to the facilities to buy a car, also the number of population is increasing in the world, especially the working people. In other hand, population pyramid reveals that young people will increment, for that reason this is the kind of people is who needs a car for transportation. Moreover, if the populations increase hence, the habitable zones also will this patter. By the way, car use will be more necessary to transport long distance, in addition to this; the car provides them comfort and timesaving.
Thirdly, at this time in the futures, women there are participating actively in the economy of the country. Consequently, they need a car for transportation at work. In the past time, women stayed at home, they did not require a vehicle, because just they were doing work at home or cared for their children. For that reason the necessities of women are changing; in the future, probably they will represent the 50 percent of people who acquires a car. I am absolutely convinced that the cars in use will rise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...tain a credit to buy a car will increase,. The family living far requires a more c...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tract customers and increase the sales. Therefore currently the people of the middle clas...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... car for transportation at work. In the past time, women stayed at home, they did not req...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'by the way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25935828877 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.139037433155 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0374331550802 0.0866891130778 43% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0614973262032 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0294117647059 0.0685040099705 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109625668449 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0213903743316 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77756491379 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347593582888 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.157754010695 0.0887237588012 178% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0267379679144 0.0209618222197 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00534759358289 0.0139019557991 38% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1909.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 330.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78484848485 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309090909091 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233333333333 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178787878788 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124242424242 0.112833075102 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77756491379 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524242424242 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 54.9225785688 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3684210526 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5071001696 48.84282405 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.473684211 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.947368421053 0.644075263715 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 40.701754386 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.6976744186 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277919405564 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108161404104 0.103427244359 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.076455846822 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534737106667 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114975007792 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121814245291 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715561007663 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.503176018645 0.336927656856 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0587383097722 0.067059652881 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205294490626 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279394730406 0.0618886996521 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.