The author and the professor hold different views about whether dinosaurs are endotherms or not. According to the passage, dinosaurs were capable of keeping their body temperatures stable; however, the professor denies all the arguments presented in the reading.
The passage indicates that since scientists discovered dinosaur fossils in polar regions, they must have the capacity to keep themselves warm in cold environment; yet the professor points out that the polar regions were much warmer than today, so dinosaurs could live there when the climate was suitable and they might hibernate when the weather was cold too. That means the presence of fossils is not necessarily the proof of dinosaurs’ ability to keep body temperature constant.
The author points out that dinosaurs’ legs are beneath their bodies and so are modern endotherms’, so dinosaurs are very likely to be endotherms; on the other hand, the professor claims that dinosaurs’ legs were underneath because this could allow them to grow bigger. Growing bigger could a great advantage for dinosaurs, so the position of legs does not necessarily mean that they could run or they were endotherms.
The passage suggests that the bone structure of dinosaurs shows that they were endotherms, because their bones contain Haversian canals, which is an important feature of endotherms; however, the professor says that although there are Haversian canals, dinosaurs’ bones have growth rings. Growth rings prove that dinosaurs did not constantly grow fast. This indicates that they were not endotherms which can grow rapidly no matter how the climate changes.
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...ferent views about whether dinosaurs are endotherms or not. According to the pass...
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...ssage, dinosaurs were capable of keeping their body temperatures stable; however,...
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..., the professor denies all the arguments presented in the reading. The p...
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...sts discovered dinosaur fossils in polar regions, they must have the capacity to ...
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...capacity to keep themselves warm in cold environment; yet the professor points ou...
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... that the polar regions were much warmer than today, so dinosaurs could live ther...
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...e when the climate was suitable and they might hibernate when the weather was col...
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... too. That means the presence of fossils is not necessarily the proof of dinosaur...
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...s' ability to keep body temperature constant. The author points out...
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...o keep body temperature constant. The author points out that dinosaurs&apo...
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...legs are beneath their bodies and so are modern endotherms', so dinosaurs ar...
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...ry likely to be endotherms; on the other hand, the professor claims that dinosaur...
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... legs were underneath because this could allow them to grow bigger. Growing bigge...
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...r could a great advantage for dinosaurs, so the position of legs does not necessa...
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...ly mean that they could run or they were endotherms. The passage suggest...
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...ould run or they were endotherms. The passage suggests that the bone struc...
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...ucture of dinosaurs shows that they were endotherms, because their bones contain ...
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... Haversian canals, which is an important feature of endotherms; however, the prof...
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...e professor says that although there are Haversian canals, dinosaurs' bones ...
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...ve growth rings. Growth rings prove that dinosaurs did not constantly grow fast. ...
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... fast. This indicates that they were not endotherms which can grow rapidly no mat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70866141732 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89799082067 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8420975563 48.9658058833 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.111111111 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.45110844103 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.53405017921 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0127801896062 0.236089414692 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00440130081757 0.076458572812 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00874113617802 0.0737576698707 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00442248839506 0.150856017488 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144084796959 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 10.9000537634 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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